E-Writing assignment 4

The Devils Nest

Hans stood there and looked at the entering. He knew what he had to do but did not dare to go in there. Behind him stood Tony, Both Hans and Tony belonged in the police forces Lonestar. The mayor’s youngest son had runaway from home and they suspected that he was hiding in the abandoned subway station called The Devils Nest. Few people dared to go down there because this was a dangerous place where orphans lived and not just ordinary once. This was children who after years and years of abuse and miss conditions decided to runaway. To start a city of there own, where they could live by them self and keep the adult world away. No one really knew what was going on down there, because once you passed the entrance you where never seen again. Some old stories say that cannibalism was common there and that people got raped every single day. The Lonestars believes that it was one leader or a small group of persons who ruled down there but no one really knew. Hans saw this mission as a suicide mission and he didn’t believe that he will survive this. It was simple get in there and find the mayor’s son and get him out of there.  Hans and Tony’s mission might seem easy but was one of the most fearsome things you could do.

To get down to the subway you had to walk in to a dark corridor and walk straight ahead until you get to the stairs. Hans and Tony walked slowly towards the stairs. Tony could hear his heart beating in his chest. “It feels like my heart is going to jump out of my chest and run back to the entrance” Tony says. “Quiet you foul” Hans answers. Over the stairs it hanged small lamps which barely gave any light. Once there they could hear a small sound from the subway station who sounded like a ghost city. Every so often you could here screams and calls for help. The stairs was old and if you didn’t walk carefully you might slip and fall down. “Get out your gun, now its starts to get dangerous” Hans says and looks at Tony. Tony wares his Lonestar uniform, its dark blue and the Lonestar badge is on the left side of the chest. The badge consisted of a large gold star and in the middle of the star it stood “Lonestar” and the policeman’s work number. Hans had exactly the same outfit and he also had black glasses.  They knew that this outfit didn’t work in there favor, every one down in The Devils Nest hated The Lonestars and if they got the chance they would attack them on sight. “Why do we have to wear these uniforms? It won’t help us down here!” Tony asks. “Because stupid, a Lonestar shall never be afraid to show other that he is a Lonestar. You know our motto standing strong even if we are alone” Hans says and looks at Tony with an irritated glance.

They walked carefully down the stairs and the sound from the subway stations became louder and louder. When they where at the bottom of the stairs they saw a large door, the door was open and over the door it was a statue. The statue was an image of an old man with a child I his arms. Hans and Tony stood there for a while and just looked at the statue. They couldn’t stop looking it was hypnotized and they was draw to its look. The old man looked strait in too Hans and Tony eyes and the child hold his finger to his mouth. Hans could hear a voice in side his head, he couldn’t understand what it was saying but he felt that he wanted to submit to the statue and follow the words. All of a sudden a little girl comes running and screams for help. After her a guy come running whit a knife I his left hand and he was all black around his eyes. He looked possessed of something and he screamed at the girl in some language they couldn’t understand. It sounded like the voice in side Hans head.

When Hans looked around him he saw that Tony stood with his mouth opened and tears was dripping from his eyes. He talked they way the guy and the voice did. Hans pushed Tony and shacked him. Suddenly tony was back and he looked at Hans and asked “What are you doing? It hurts!” Tony looked at Hans and took a step back. “How was it you where talking to?” Hans asked. “Don’t know it just talked and I answered all of a sudden I could talk at that language. It was awesome!” Tony answers and looks exited. “Come on we most carryon” Hans says and walks through the door. The next room was full of ticket windows and old benches. Children were lying on the floor and were sitting up against the walls. They looked strait ahead and talked out in the open. Every single one looked possessed it was almost like they were praying to some one. Hans walked to one of the children a little boy who had marks and wounds all over his chest and arms. “Commendo me tuis es dominus Tenebrae” this was the words that came out from the boy and he said it over and over again.

Hans and Tony walked to the opening in the far side of the room. They walked through the door and noticed that on the other side it was all dark. They couldn’t see a thing and so they stopped. Hans took up his flashlight and started to look around him. But I didn’t help even when Hans used the flashlight it was still dark. Hans and Tony started to walk slowly backwards towards the door that they just came through but I was gone. They where trapped in a dark room with no where to go. All of a sudden a light started to shine just over Hans head and he could see that Tony stood next to him with closed eyes. Tony Talked the way he did before and was saying exactly the same as the boy did “Commendo me tuis es dominus Tenebrae”. Hans stood there and was afraid that the same thing would happen to him. He stood there looking and he saw a large creature coming his way. As the creature came closer he saw that it was an old man who had beard that reached to his knees. He had a red coat and a red hat. In his left hand he had a book and his right he had a whip. The old man stopped just in front of Hans and Tony. He looked at Tony and said ”Welcome my child”. Tony answered on the same language that he was talking before. “Gratias tibi domine” he said and walked pass the large man.

“What are you doing to him” Hans screamed. “Welcoming him to the eternity” the old man said whit a smile. “Leave him alone!” Hans said. “He came on his own will and you can do nothing about it!” The old man said whit a laugh. “How are you?” Hans asks. The old man stretches and becomes 6 feet taller then before. “I am the anxiety in your chest. I am the shadow that’s hunts you. I Am the Nightmare you children dreams. I am everything you fear!” The old man said and whips out in the air. All of a sudden the book starts to float and leaves the old mans hand, it opens by itself and out of it comes black smoke that fills the room that they are standing in. it starts to blow and the smoke starts to rotate around Hans and the old man. Hans takes up his gun and starts to shoot at the old man. “Make it stop you freak!” He said. The old man starts to laugh and blocks the shoots with his hand. Hans couldn’t believe his eyes and he drops the gun. “If you come voluntary you shall find out that I can be a nice guy” the old man said. “And if I don’t!” Hans answers. “Then you shall see that your worst nightmare shall come true!” The old man said and whips in the air once again. The black smoke disappears and the room around them is now lighted. Behind the old man stands a large number of other people who was black around there eyes. Most of them where children and was not older then eighteen years old. Hans could see that the mayor’s son was standing next to the old man and he looked like the rest of the children, Black around there eyes.

It hurts in Hans Heart when he sees so many children “Why?” He asks. “Because that’s the way it works and it always has!” the old man answers. “So you are god or something?” “Yes I am a god, but not the good and kind god that you people worship. I am the opposite of good; I am the opposite of kind. I rule the world beyond yours. Where there is no sunrise, only dawn. No day, only night and once you got in. you never go back!” The old man said whit a look that could kill anyone on site. Hans takes a step back and asks “But why so many children?”

“Because I offer these orphans salvation and gives them a alternative to the life they used to live. When your good god abandons them I show them a god who really cares about his children and hears his people’s prayers. That’s why!” the old man walks and stands behind the crowd of people and says” Now if you excuse me, I have a world to rule. “My children Feast on his flesh.” The old man says whit a laugh and walks away. The crowd moves closer and Hans could see in there eyes that they where going to take him. They did and Hans screamed in pain and called for help. He felt how the life was sucked out of him. Everything became dark and a voice said “Welcome to Hell, you will not enjoy it!”

By: Alexander Lönn

E-writing assignment 3.3

Poem 3

There once was a city called Madrid

Where people ran naked in the street

A guy called Sam

Who didn’t like ham

But everywhere he looked he saw naked butts

By: Alexander Lönn

E-writing assignment 3.2

The City of Dreams

Yea, that’s what they call it

The city of dreams

Here is were your wildest dreams comes true

Well, at least that’s what they say

So you take’s your old pair of jeans

And travels towards this city of dreams

With the hope of achieve something

That’s much greater then anything before

Because in this city no one can fail

That’s what they say at least

And you love the way people live here

Everyday is a party

Girls, Girls, Girls

Everybody is nice

Everyone laughs

Everything shines

You can have it all

All you have to do is to reach out and crab it

If you can

But then the day comes when

When nobody laughs 

And all your credit card gets smashed in fucking half

Your so called friend backs stabs you

And you walk alone in the dark streets

No one to talk to

No one that listens

No one who cares

And you sit there with a big bag of cannabis

And watch your life pass through in reruns

But wasn’t this the city of dreams

Where your wildest dreams come true

No, it’s all false; everybody looks after its own winnings

And no body truly cares about you

It’s like Pandora’s Box

When you open it you have to take the consequences

If you don’t believe me… take a closer look… if you can

By: Alexander Lönn

E-writing assignment 3,1

Poem

The woman rises

And with a slight touch the

Sun catches her face

By: Alexander Lönn

E-Writing Assignment 2.3

Bob And Frank

Ron- What in the name of god do you guys think you are doing out there? What is your major malfunction? This is the fourth time in two weeks!

Frank- I don’t know, those guys are hard to get

Ron- Hard? Please Frank tell me why are they so hard to get?

Frank- Well they are so big and strong, I can’t match these guys!

Ron- Well that’s just fucking stupid!

Bob – I agree with Frank!

Ron- Well Bob maybe you should think of doing something else in the future, because you are doing nothing right. You are just crap!

Frank- But sir tell us then what we should do

Ron- Well it’s easy you just go in there and take them out! Is that so hard?

Bob- Considered that they are three times more people then us and they also have bigger guns, well yes it’s little tricky.

Frank- Please sir don’t be so hard on us, we are doing the best we can. We police officers are not trained to do such things. Maybe we should wait for them to come to us instead of us coming to them?

Ron- Frank I think you did it again! You must be the dumbest person who has ever walked this god loving earth. You are both suspended from your work

Bob and Frank – Why?

Ron- Because you are so crappie at your job. You guys has been in the newspapers four times the last two weeks and not because you did something heroic, but because you two did something stupid and it’s I who has to explain to the guys who has five times your salary! Now please get the fuck out of my office!

By: Alexander Lönn

E-Writing Assingnment 2.2

Love The Way You Lie

The rain had started to fall; it was just another ordinary October day. I’m sitting in my bedroom when I hear that my father comes trough the front door. In my hand I’m holding a letter that’s states that we have been thrown out from our apartment because my father hasn’t paid the rent. I’m gathering strength to confront my father, my head feels al dizzy and I have problem standing up straight. Fathe sits down at the dining table whit a news paper in his hands. I place myself on the other side of the table and stares my father direct in to his eyes.

Me- Have you read this?

Father- No, what’s that?

Me- it’s a paper that says that we have to be out of here by next month!

My father’s face turns in to a light red colour

Father- let my se that!

He starts to read it and after a while he says

Father- it most be something wrong, I paid the last rent!

Me- Dad stop lying, I’ve checked you haven’t paid the last 6 months rent. Where should I go when we gets thrown out?

My fathers face now turns from red to white and he looks down in at the table

Father- we will fix this, don’t worry. In the last weeks I’ve won some money from my poker gaming.

Me- well where are they? And can I then get back my three thousands you borrowed from me?

Father- didn’t you get them back? I thought that you got them. Well I did forget my wallet at my job so you will get them tomorrow.

Me- tomorrow? You don’t go to work at Sundays

Father- hey, don’t worry everything is going to be alright!

Me- how is everything going to be alright? Please father tell me, because I don’t understand how the fuck everything is going to be alright!

Father- I will call them tomorrow and solve al this, don’t worry!

Me- It’s Sunday tomorrow, the office is not open on weekends! What’s wrong whit you?

Now my dark brown eyes turned in to black

Father- what is it? Do you not trust me?

Me- I want to, but I just can’t. Since mama left you, everything has been a mess. You are not the same. You talk al these bullshit and when you come home from work the first thing you do is to sit down by the computer and play poker. I’m tired to se and hear you lying strait in to my face. I want to have my old dad back!

Father- that’s not true! I am the same person, I haven’t changed a bit. You are just paranoid.

Me- Paranoid? What about this letter then?

Father- As I told you it’s some kind of mistake!

My father rises from his chair and walks towards the trash bin and throws the latter and says

Father- don’t worry! I will fix it tomorrow.

And he walks in to the living room and turns on the computer. I walks after, stands in the door way and says

Me- Please father face it, you are addicted to gambling!

Father- Mind your own business!

I turn around and walks to my room, I pack my bag whit my most personal belongings and some of my most dear things. I put on my shoes and walks towards the front door. As I was standing there my father shouts from the living room.

Father- Where are you going?

Me- Father I don’t know, I really don’t!

And I walk out of the front door, the rain has increased and it’s al dark and cold outside. I turn on my IPod and as I was walking towards nothing the song “Love the Way You Lie” streams out of the headphones

By: Alexander Lönn

E-Writing assignment 2.1

Departments

Two office workers who know but dislike each other are trapped in a lift/an elevator with a sales representative who they've never met before but who they're both immediately attracted to. Help is on its way.

Ben- Nooo Not again!

Glen- it’s like the fourth time this week

Carrol- I really don’t like things like this!

Carrol draws closer to Glen, Ben looks at Glen whit a bitter glance.

Glen- well then it’s good that I’m here so I can protect you

And he puts his left arm around her, looks at Ben and smiles. Ben shakes his head, takes up his cell phone, looks at it and noticed that there is no connection in the elevator.

Glen- So What’s your name dear?

Carrol- Carrol and you?

Glen- My name is Glen and I’m work at department six.

Carol- yea really interesting, I work a…

Ben- Department 7

Ben interrupts her and draws closer to Carrol and puts his arm around her. Glen and Ben looks deep in to each others eyes in an attempt to challenge each other.

Carrol starts to feel uneasy and moves away from Glen and Ben. Both of the guys start slowly moving towards Carrol

Ben- So Carrol this weekend! Do you haven any plans?

Carrol- Yes I do and those plans do not include you!

Glen – haha Ice Cold!

Ben gets upset and goose to the far side of the elevator, closes his eyes and starts to count to ten slowly

The elevator starts to move again, Glen feels that he has to make a move before it’s to late.

Glen- Carrol do you want to have lunch whit me sometime?

The doors to the elevator opens and on the outside a women appears on the outside. Carrol turns around and gives the women a hug and a kiss

Carrol- Take care now boys!

The elevator doors slowly closes behind Carrol and in side Glen and Ben are just standing there with open mouths

By: Alexander Lönn

E-writing assignment 1

The mistake

There he was, alone in the pouring rain, wondering if this was it. Denny was just standing there looking back at the house he just came out from. His back is hurting and he has bruising on the arms and legs. He is holding 2000kr in his left hand and wondering if this is the life he has to live to survive. Two years back Denny was happily married to a lovely wife had three happy children and a big beautiful house right by the coast. Then one little mistake took al of that away from him. His wife sued Danny and took al the money and children. From that moment Danny hade no home, no family and no money, His parents had past away some years earlier and he was the only child. He was al alone.

Slowly Danny starts to walk towards his car, a tear drops from his cheek. Danny sits down in his car, closes his eyes and dreams back to the time when he had a family who loved him and just longed for him to come home. Suddenly a man knocks on the window and Danny rolled it down and the man starts to speak. “Shall we say same time next Wednesday?” Danny answers “yea that will be fine” and the man went back  to the house that Danny just had came out from. Before the man goose inside the house he turns around and shout’s “Dam it Danny your one fine screaming bitch” The man had a silver coloured bathrobe, dark green slipper and he had a cigar in his mouth. The man’s white curly hair was al wet and it looked like he just had come out from a shower.  Danny starts the car en turns on the radio. On the radio they played Danny’s favorite song “November Rain” and when the singer sing’s out “Because nothing last forever, even cold November rain” a little light of hope started to shine in Danny’s heart. Funny enough, it was raining just this night and Danny starts to laugh a bit.

The time was 21:50 and when Danny looked in his papers he noticed that he had to be at his next client in just ten minuets. When he arrives at the next house a young black haired and black dressed girl comes running towards the car, opens the door and shouts at Danny “DRIVE DRIVE”. She is al sweaty and looks out of one’s senses. From the house comes a man running with a big shotgun in his hands and starts shooting at the car. “Shit” Screams Danny and stamps on the gas. He drives for two miles and then stops at a gas station. These two human beings had not sad a word to one another on the entire way but now Danny ask the girl “ okay what the fuck was that al about and how are you?”  The girl looks up at Danny and looks straight in to his eyes. “Don’t you remember me?” Danny just shakes his head. “I’m your daughter!”  The girl throws her hair back and Danny now sees it. It’s his fourteen year old daughter. He couldn’t se it when she came running because she had al of her hair hanging down over her face and when Danny last meet her, she had short blonde hair. Back then she looked like a little princes and now she looked like a hooker. Danny throws his arms around her. But she just backs away and says “Dad please, I’m not the same girl now that I was when you left us. I’m just an illusion of what I used to be and you can’t put your arms around a memory” Danny starts to stare straight a head and says “first I didn’t leave, I got throw out and your mother made sure that I wasn’t aloud to see or meet you. She took al of my money and I was thrown out on the street. “Dad” the girl says don’t lie to your self it wasn’t her fault that your marriage became fucked up, it was your fault. So don’t blame her for it, it was your mistake who fucked up our family”. That light of hope in Danny’s heart had just been blown out and he felt al shattered again. “But just tell me one ting, what did you do in that mans house? I was doing the same ting that you did earlier this day at other men’s houses, waving my as in the air and lay me on the bed so other men can use me for money. Yes dad I’m a prostitute just like you” The girl opens the door and starts walking away from the car in the rain. Danny felt like a spoon was trying to cut his heart in two and he rolls down his window and begging the girl to come back but she never did.

By: Alexander Lönn